“Goodbye to Sunny Days” Chapter 1
May 20, 2021
Chapter 1:
My feet sunk into the sandy beach of Losmas Heights. For a 15-year-old girl, I was fast, really fast. I sprinted across the coast, carefully leaping over discarded rocks, shells, and twigs. Turning my head to stare behind me, I brushed my unruly red locks out of my line of sight. I could hear my friend’s voices catching up to her. We had been playing tag around the small town for almost an hour and I was the last one left. I flew across the sand with the safe spot in sight. You can do it, Valerie! You can outrun them! You got this, you got this, you got th-
Wam!
My head was spinning, before I knew it, I was on the ground. I could hear a worried yet unfamiliar voice. Slowly opening my eyes, I raised a hand up to my face to block out the fiery sun. I turned my head to the side in time to notice a clearly panicking girl. The teenager’s short curly chocolate brown hair hung in front of her right eye, obscuring it from view. She was sporting a loose Jamician T-shirt and baggy drawstring shorts.
“Oh my god! I’m so, so, so sorry! I wasn’t looking where I was going-” The girl rambled, helping me rise from the sandy shore. My cheeks had turned red as I shook the sand off my shirt.
“Please don’t worry about it! I’m such a klutz!” I exclaimed. I took in the girl’s appearance, as the teenager struggled to remove a small stick from her hair. “Are you on the Townoak running team? I don’t think I’ve seen you around here.” The girl giggled before explaining. “ Nope! Me and my family just moved here from Atlanta but I love running! I’ll be starting Lomas High School next week. I’ve heard that they have a really good cross country team. I’m going to try out next Tuesday”
“Nice to meet you, I’m Valerie Blair, the vice president of the cross country team. Let me know if you need any help! I’d be happy to show you around the town.” I offered, grinning. “Amancia Dawson. I’ll have to take you up on your offer some time. We just moved into a house on Birch Street.” My eyes widened. “You’re the family that moved in next door to me? That’s amazing!”
Amanica nodded. “I probably should be getting back home. I have some things to unpack, and I think you have some guests.” She smirked, pointing behind me. “Hey wait!” I grabbed her arm quickly before being blinded by a flashing light. Images were flying in front of my face. A car crash, blood, a hospital, and a grave. I let go of her arm and stumbled backward. What the heck just happened?
n • Jun 2, 2021 at 8:26 am
I LOVE this story and you should TOTALLY turn it into a boook
Alexia • Jun 2, 2021 at 8:18 am
This is such an interesting chapter 1! Keep it up!
Your spanish friend • Jun 1, 2021 at 8:58 am
Are you gonna post another chapter?
Cooper • Jun 1, 2021 at 8:53 am
I thought this chapter was a good piece of writing, I thought it was a very creative and organized piece of writing.
Jack kielbaso • Jun 1, 2021 at 8:52 am
good job
veeran • Jun 1, 2021 at 8:51 am
I love this chapter and I look forward to the others!
Maya Ilijanic • Jun 1, 2021 at 8:50 am
I really like the creativity that you put into your work.
Hassan • Jun 1, 2021 at 8:50 am
I really like the ending, nice cliffhanger
Laney • Jun 1, 2021 at 8:50 am
I really like the start of this book, nice work!
Laney • Jun 1, 2021 at 8:49 am
I really like the start of this book! nice work!
Alex Wassel • May 28, 2021 at 8:10 am
wait… did you write this?
Just A Regular Shiba Inu • May 27, 2021 at 1:20 pm
I just noticed a minor error, is her name Amancia, or Amanica?
Medusa • Aug 17, 2022 at 3:26 pm
Hi, It’s been a year, but it’s the author, Her name is Amancia, for some reason my computer kept correcting it as Amanica and I somehow missed it before posting the final draft, so sorry about that.
Just A Regular Shiba Inu • May 27, 2021 at 1:17 pm
So this is like a sort of short novel, it’s cool. I think you’ll become a great writer, you’ve proven you can do it just with the first 2 paragraphs.
graham pirrie • May 26, 2021 at 8:28 am
same can you email me too? my email is [email protected]
Charlie • May 25, 2021 at 8:10 am
I really liked this chapter can you either email me how to get this book or can you post chapter two on the bite?